This is the 10:30 show for the same night as the last set
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aZf6EfD-77Y
0m21s I think the look might be more effective if I don’t move my head around so much and just dart my eyes from side to side instead
1m48s The guy answered “he’s old”
3m00s No need to say that it’s a great idea
3m11s End the sentence on “they beat me”, or better yet, don’t say this line
3m25s A good pause after “third time this week” gets a good laugh
3m42s More emphasis on “unemployment office”
4m56s Great line “you guys are nice, I don’t like that”, no need to say “I like mean crowds” though
5m38s Pause after “vicious” as I stopped a laugh
Overall: I’m working on getting a tight six minute set that’s all laughs in order to submit my video to comedy festivals. (Many have a 6 minute limit on the video submission.) This wasn’t that set. I really need a larger audience
