A Saturday afternoon mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o1PB-KFGR8E
1m10s I’m talking way too fast and not pausing for laughs
1m38s I delivered it really well, but don’t crack up after doing it
3m00s It should be “and I haven’t named our future children”
3m41s I should throw in “cause usually when you know you’re going home with someone, you start doing a little dance in your head, I’m gonna get some, la la la, la la”
4m14s Add in an address after her name
5m29s Great improvised meta-joke
6m33s That save line doesn’t make sense here
7m07s Instead of “that’s the same thing” it should be “that’s the same level of gift as”
Overall: I had a lot of fun doing this mic cause of the hosts complaint about everyone doing dark stuff before I got on stage, and then I started doing dark stuff. The Yale joke is working well, the tubes joke needs to be delivered slower, and the millionaire joke has potential but needs some fixing…
