An open mic with like 5 comics in the audience
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MHsKTmAyKfA
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MHsKTmAyKfA
0m41s Do more of a female voice
0m52s Say the “I’m not a man” line in a more husky voice
1m14s No need for the “and have I mentioned” part
1m59s Put “when I need to get my van repainted” first and then mention “which is every week”
2m57s Say “Yale” before lab technician to emphasize it
3m44s That doesn’t even make sense but it’s funny
4m16s It should be “mmm, you like photos of grown men, huh?”
4m33s This joke needs serious changing
5m01s Put more emphasis on “That’s a lot” before saying “money” under my breath
Overall: Some bits hit better than others, and most need rewriting or other adjustments
