Thursday night show about 25 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZgIPKxQsMLQ
0m05s I almost slipped on the wet floor on my way up to the stage
1m30s No reason to acknowledge the “damn” as it ruined the flow, but if I’m gonna acknowledge it, I need to say three funny things about it
3m08s The line “hire a hit man” hasn’t been hitting, try to reword it
6m36s They don’t seem comfortable with the sexual nature of the YELP joke
7m20s When an audience is uncomfortable with YELP, talk about morning after pills, good idea!
7m55s Whoops, why’d I say “babies are dangerous” twice, I didn’t even realize it or I would’ve acknowledged it
Overall: The first six minutes were strong than I lost the audience a bit at the Yelp joke, and then I almost had them back on board during the Plan B material, but I flubbed a punch line.
