Category: Performance Critiques

An 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/OPtReG8CEKI

0m26s Try to open eyes wider if it seems like the lighting will cast a shadow

3m47s Open eyes wider on the kiss face

4m30s Smile a little more

Overall: Ok not great. Had low laughs for most punch lines.

Doing a filming for an online site, so I was supposed to look straight ahead and not interact with the audience too much

httpv://youtu.be/sImQa1inTLU

4m26s Good job with the pauses here

7m25s Didn’t really need a save line here

Overall: Mostly consistent laughs, but the first 7 minutes went better than the last minute.

The 10pm show

httpv://youtu.be/4cWFKuI4BmE

2m15s Tighten the setup to “People in Connecticut would complain about things an immigrant would never complain about.”

4m01s Try “that’s not a qualification, right?” instead of “that’s not the same thing, right?”

5m27s Emphasize “full time”

Overall: Ok set.

The 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/XA7SWMvM_F4

3m08s Make this setup one sentence instead of three jumbled sentences

4m01s Don’t look down on the punch word

5m25s Don’t have my head so low

8m42s Adjust the mic stand at the start, so it doesn’t look weird and awkward at the end when I don’t have time to adjust it properly

Overall: Solid set, and the new bit about SEFFs is finally starting to work.

The 10pm show

httpv://youtu.be/amDbtgqDhzE

1m01s Hit “disappointdar” harder

Overall: Ok. A little up and down.