Category: Performance Critiques

An 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/HGcnGL3i6Q4

2m30s Emphasize “never”

6m13s Cutting into this part of the joke without the part before is a little weird

Overall: Eh, so so at best. But the newer bits (Connecticut complaints and divorce) parts did decent.

A 1am prom show

httpv://youtu.be/Q1A3S4_Bj_Y

3m31s Could’ve asked “can you spell forensic psychologist?”

4m07s Good call back to prior crowd work

Overall: Great job just doing crowd work for over five minutes. Figure out a way to deliver actual material in the same manner.

Check spot during the 10pm show

httpv://youtu.be/rb7Xy9fm9i4

1m37s Screwed up the set up of this

3m09s More emphasis on “never”

Overall: Good first few minutes, last couple of minutes were weaker

The 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/OgIERQkG9PA

3m20s Could’ve talked to them a little bit here. Or say “you might not wanna clap until you hear where I’m going with this.”

3m48s Cut the word “public”

8m41s Nice little call back to prior crowd work

11m08s Talk a little about her birthday first

Overall: First half was stronger than the second half. Work on making crowd work and material more seamless.

The 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/Iu9YK6f82Mg

0m24s If mentioning “all over the place” say a couple of places that came up

4m24s The people I’m talking to were interacting/disrupting most of the show and kinda biker gang looking

6m05s Car battery mascot is forced in if I go on a tangent first

7m26s Very polite way ever of calling the audience slow

8m26s Feel like material here, I could’ve asked “are you married?” and then gone into it

10m38s I need to smile more during the whole marriage cell phone bit, otherwise it feels mean

Overall: Good job going along with the crowd interactions, response to material could’ve been stronger