httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aJ0jsmgPUMY
0m11s No clue why I keep opening with this
1m48s I don’t know if there’s multiple types, I swear!
2m16s I should throw in “whoever’s laughing has herpes”
3m42s Someone trying to be witty for no reason
4m44s First time ever this line has gotten zero laughs
Overall: Pretty horrible set, but a new line came out of this, so it wasn’t for naught
This is the Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_6MMlw5F1WI
0m27s Rewinding time is fun
1m25s The “cancel relationship” line should be later on
1m48s I shouldn’t call out applause breaks
2m12s Audience member outwitted me, if I was quick I would’ve offered to do it 3 times and have her owe me 3.5 inches
2m53s VCR manual always gets a laugh with comics but never with a real audience
3m57s The first “help me” should be more distraught
4m24s Kill the material between here and 4m42s
Overall: I tried out some newer material and it mostly worked. The Rock, Paper, Coat hanger might only work with meaner audiences, and the bits about my Russian background need to be tightened.
This is the midnight show and the checkspot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WEbHe0GjUBg
0m57s I should’ve started nodding a half second sooner
1m22s I missed “if you do that” before “then you got huge tubes”
2m00s My tone for “Igor likes this” wasn’t drastic enough
2m14s Talking way too fast
2m41s More emphasis on “circus”
2m58s I shouldn’t have two sentences in a row that start with “but”
3m35s No need to drop in the yearbook thing
4m30s Calling out the current situation always gets a laugh
6m01s I need more emphasis on “huge tubes”
Overall: I talked too fast and my tonality was off. I need to learn how to do a check spot better.
Second show of the night
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DKsTXFMPdMY
1m08s Pause between “then you got” and “huge tubes”
1m44s Rhetorically ask the crowd “Do you know what the worst part of breaking up is?” instead of just telling them
2m57s Say the three words with a one second pause between each one
3m45s I said “she actually means it” in a weird tone
Overall: This set was only four minutes long, the main thing I noticed is I should slow down.
The 8PM show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kq2cRUJcqHs
1m02s Too much emphasis on “that”, not enough emphasis on “tubes”
1m22s I missed the words “This leads to” before “Ben’s practical tip of the week”
2m31s I messed up the Jehovahs witness punch line, I think I forgot the line right before I was gonna do it, you can see the pause
3m13s I should’ve gotten out of this joke after the “I just assume they’re deaf”
3m37s I gotta remember the “I’ll try not to break it up” line
5m29s I need to react to the audience members response when I ask them
5m51s Getting laughs on two of my last three lines is my current par for the course
Overall: Decent set but I could’ve talked slower the whole time. I found one line that I improvised that I need to start using consistently
