I had to leave to get to another show, so I went up before the MC
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zMs5cipg7fg
4m43s Say “I like your shoes” in a flirtier way
Overall: Pretty mediocre set, I should’ve done more MC type stuff since I went on before the MC
A Saturday afternoon mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h1jOm-l2Wqs
2m06s Pause between “nobody would take credit for her” and “she’s washed up”
2m32s Nonexistent momentum, that is
3m40s I missed “I was like”
Overall: I need to learn to create my own energy when the audience (or other comics in this case) isn’t giving me any energy to feed off of
A late night music and comedy show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TUqjh6hmdCY
0m23s That’s a funny follow up, I think I came up with it on the spot
3m18s This needs a stronger ending
5m59s Maybe I should keep this joke after all?
6m37s Or just keep those first two lines of the joke..
8m31s Say this punch line stronger and more confidently
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fCkDom7MebQ
Overall: The newer material is working but it needs a stronger ending
An afternoon open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OAE2kh65NcU
2m23s Name the homeless guy
4m07s Make this into one, “can I upgrade the contract in two years?”
4m58s Say “that got cancelled a while ago”
6m38s Hit “we were on a plane” a lot stronger
Overall: Worked out some material at a mic
A small show in a basement of a restaurant
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dTBgD7itW-w
1m51s Say “when you throw it” before “the screen breaks”
3m40s No need to say “he literally took of his shoes”
6m42s Start this joke with emphasizing each word, instead of starting it at the third time
8m38s The sand joke is starting to get laughs in more places
Overall: I did mostly newer jokes in front of something resembling an audience and they mostly went over well
