An afternoon open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QIZ5XonhpSA
1m30s Add on “anymore”
2m18s Put “cheetos” last
3m12s Cut the gant chart, nobody knows what I’m talking about
3m39s Cut the whole approved topics bit
5m39s Get more worked up
7m19s Keep holding the photo
Overall: The Netflix joke went over well and the uptight girlfriend needs to be shortened
A mixed music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sDhF5hay33k
0m58s First time that’s gotten 3 “awwws” in a row, I should’ve called it out
3m38s It should be “intended purpose” not “intended feature”
5m48s One person really liked that joke
Overall: I remembered this going better than it went on the tape
Doing a set at my Astoria show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PlGJ6waSRKg
2m03s Reword to “he booked me here tonight”
2m22s No need to say all the stuff I just said
7m48s Don’t say that either
Overall: I know this intellectually and don’t usually do it, but hinted to the audience that they suck and that I have a more important set to do after this. That’s guaranteed way to turn an audience.
My fourth show of the night, in the basement of an Italian restaurant at 2am
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pd9X-47M17A
1m01s Go after him more, or try to get some sort of laugh
6m04s Get rid of eucharist
Overall: Considering I was on towards the end of a late show, this was decent enough
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SEDlIu889EQ
6m02s Smile when doing the dance
Overall: I only had one strong laugh and the rest of the set was small laughs
