Performance Critique: June 1

MCing my Queens show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iqC6ti-B9ps

0m27s My new attempt at doing fake crowd work that’s a joke to start an MC set

2m03s That’s a funny question

6m10s At least I finally got the older bar patrons involved

9m56s This is why I do comedy and not singing

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cFt9rnuTPEo

0m34s Good little improv bit

Overall: I kept a positive and high energy attitude throughout the MCing set and had some good crowd work bits

Performance Critique: May 29

The Saturday night show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9e8ZXm5G6-Q

3m18s Gotta love when the lights get turned out

6m35s I need to word “whenever someone is” before “repeating the words”

Overall: Decent but not amazing, although the homeless guy joke is finally working

Performance Critique: May 28b

The Friday night show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tbNn5L8UF2Q

3m18s That line doesn’t work there

3m38s The checks are being dropped

5m05s Change “table 3” to “I think we found the cokeheads”

7m05s Good strong laugh to end on

Overall: I had a great first 3 minutes, then the checks got dropped but I was still getting some laughs and ended strong. The ideal goal is to be so good that nobody looks at their checks until I’m done

Performance Critique: May 28a

Friday afternoon open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=esbisOcUYQY

1m53s I think I said “streets” instead of “shoes” by accident

4m39s Don’t turn back to the original person, try turning to a third person

Overall: I like to do an open mic before a show to get the bad set of the day out of the way, and I succeeded

Performance Critique: May 27b

Late night music and comedy show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y6_nH7eyf5M

2m32s The cheetos end is a keeper

5m01s Say “years” instead of “times”

6m32s It should be “screwed me over” not “screwed me”

Part 2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M8cVFKj0gvE

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M8cVFKj0gvE

Overall: Pretty decent set where I mixed in old stuff and new stuff

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