Category: Performance Critiques

Music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YDiBbXXg_5I

1m31s Cause the guy was asian

7m07s Good job referencing previous crowd work

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UWFuyIAAimI

0m24s Don’t say “terrible” two sentences in a row

Overall: Nice long 17 minute set with more or less steady (although small) laughs throughout

A bar show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kD8gZT4UH0k

2m22s Add “because” before “Jesus would’ve wanted…”

5m44s Too wordy

6m41s Decent call back

Overall: Decent, but not great. I tried doing a lot of mom stuff in a row and it got a bit repetitive, even for me.

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6b2Xq4Umh_A

1m35s Either say “Rock and Roll” or “Heavy Metal” not both

3m03s Make an erasing the chalk board motion

3m24s The word “lie” should be last in the sentence

4m28s I need to say “comedy” before “class”

Overall: Decent for an open mic

Hosting my show in Queens

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GhI0PWqYLUU

3m12s Everyone turned their head so I had to call it out

4m16s Don’t say “If I wasn’t hosting I would…”

4m45s So creepy it’s funny

5m28s Get rid of the word “really” in there

5m43s Don’t say “terrible” in two examples in a row

7m29s Too wordy of a punch line

8m14s Throw in a “clap it up for young love” or something

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cdy2rk2HIRw

0m18s Working too hard for an answer that’s not even needed for the joke

2m56s Put the word “lie” last

3m22s Pick three of the four

Overall: Mediocre hosting. I could’ve done more crowd work and been higher energy.

Hosting a Monday show in a restaurant

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I8ytdCMi6pY

0m28s Or gifts

5m40s Oppressor football is a funny statement

7m33s I didn’t handle the interruption as smoothly as possible

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DORA2pAA9aI

Overall: I could’ve been had more energy as the MC, but I did a good job engaging them