A Friday night show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bbniYblKJKE
2m12s When going back to a joke from an interruption, repeat the last sentence or last few words of the previous sentence first.
3m09s Knock more authoritatively
3m20s Don’t hesitate
5m32s Say it more nonchalantly
5m42s Good awareness of time
6m09s Yelp wasn’t explained well
Overall: I got thrown by the constant talking and while I addressed it and got laughs it was still distracting
A hostel show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1RXIEPSljqs
3m25s Get rid of “for son”
4m58s That’s funny
5m28s The “I see you eye fucking me” should be more random, not after “I gotta leave you guys”
Overall: I should’ve talked to them more as the material wasn’t hitting
A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gk513_b0KeA
0m51s Maybe I should open my normal set with this joke
1m50s Slow down on the photo taking part
4m48s Needs a stronger end
Overall: Good for a mic but the multimillionaire and coldstone jokes need stronger endings
A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Llg3nmHO7_w
0m24s Say she upset me
0m37s Reword to “If you hadn’t said it”
2m58s Funnier story than it is stand up material
5m14s Try not to do twenty seconds of stalling
Overall: Nothing special
My Queens show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0AKaDKAOHQM
5m15s Say it like it’s more obvious
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_t0eLnwnRHU
0m57s That’s funny even if they didn’t think so
Overall: I should’ve done more crowd work as they weren’t going for the material
