Category: Performance Critiques

Hosting my Queens show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SajaysHY6W0

5m05s No need for “he stole whole movie”

5m31s Good job stopping with material to do some more crowd work

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q00j34xhtw8

3m09s I should’ve gone back to crowd work at least once more before brining up the first comic

3m30s Doing time between comics

4m41s Try not turning my head side to side while acting confused

7m40s Say “mundane photos” not “mundane things”

Overall: Respectable job Mcing but I should do more crowd work

Late night Monday at the club with 6 audience members left

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nwMwx57l80w

3m32s Don’t move around so quickly with the turns

4m03s That bombing line didn’t work

5m40s Pause after “he didn’t get that one either”

6m36s Pause a little longer

Overall: The first half went okay considering the crowd had been there for nearly three hours, then the laughs weren’t there as much so I started rushing my delivery. It also felt like I was talking at them at times instead of to them…

A hostel show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rO6JmKe38rQ

2m08s If they’re this dead, I should just start talking to them and stop doing material

4m31s When that gets nothing, it’s gonna be a long set

6m20s I should’ve already asked them, “Do any of you speak English”

Overall: This is as bombing as it gets. I should’ve gone into crowd work after the first few jokes didn’t hit instead of plowing through.

Sunday Writer’s Mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FryLt4xQpSY

1m00s Say “if” in both sentences “if you hadn’t said it” and “if it hadn’t been for the…”

2m06s Get rid of “he steal whole movie”

3m32s Get rid of one of the four examples

Overall: Working out some stuff

The Saturday night show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SWU22ns6tS0

3m06s I like when they groan at this part, but need to think of a way to acknowledge it

3m53s Don’t move side to side this much

7m59s Cut the Chekhov thing

Overall: Good but not great.