Performance Critique: July 15b

A show in Harlem

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x_7b8IEpIoc

0m12s The host was doing that before, so I wanted to try it, and it worked

0m15s I could’ve done it a few more times

1m59s The mom character is moving too much without purpose

3m40s Say “your” before “failed expectations”

3m59s Get rid of “he stole whole movie”

4m23s This joke works best when someone calls out for me to do it after I purposefully bail

5m54s I lost them on this joke, it’s more than a minute of barely any laughs

6m28s And it was a weak payoff

6m34s When a joke misses completely, address it before just going into another joke

7m24s Say “partners” not “hookups”

9m30s Hit this line more angrily

Overall: Good first five minutes then I lost them at the Jewel joke and never fully got them back

Performance Critique: July 15a

The worst mic in the city

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5ZvlXrxathA

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5ZvlXrxathA

2m33s I need another line for when nobody laughs at the joke fake out

Overall: I got a few laughs here, which means it’d kill anywhere else

Performance Critique: July 14c

A music and comedy mic

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DrlW64hm6BY

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DrlW64hm6BY

7m14s Cut the friend zone sentence

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xO9PkSGwX-0

2m02s Cut the Chekov line

Overall: Up and down set, but I got it rolling eventually

Performance Critique: July 14b

A bar show

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=STYN6nqohk4

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=STYN6nqohk4

0m56s I could’ve added another joke about him looking into the mirror

6m40s Remember the joke if I’m gonna do it in a real show

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bsFdvH730Wo

Overall: Eh, not great not atrocious.

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