The worst mic in the city
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FcAPXRM8R9w
0m33s At a dead mic, the best shot at laughs or at least getting people to listen is commenting on previous comic’s material
2m31s Say “you can pay for this, right?” instead of “you got this, right?”
2m48s Do the sound effect right after I say “fast forward” for the first time
5m29s Word this better
Overall: Stage time is stage time, or so I keep telling myself.
Going up last at a small show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=–7-9pokV60
2m42s Commit to the extra modeling poses harder
8m38s Get rid of the philosophy gambling line
Overall: Decent considering the show had been going on for more than two hours, the audio isn’t great here cause of the air conditioning
A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wHJX_LBQZFw
0m53s Add in a “cause” before “it’s not stealing”
1m58s The “what are you guys up to later?” doesn’t make sense here, sell the flirting more if I’m gonna do it
3m21s Cut this act out
4m10s Cut the gambling on philosophers part
5m23s Cut the last part of this joke
6m00s Reword to “unless it’s physical contact”
Overall: I tried out a bunch of newer jokes, they need work.
Hosting my Queens show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HtOj5dGOEY8
1m42s Hold up the gun more convincingly
3m39s Repeat the whole job title first, then translate it to bullshit artist
9m24s It should be “banged” then “nailed” not the same word twice
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q6QykMmYj_4
0m34s Doing time between comics
2m50s After saying “fast forward that” once, make the sound effect
3m07s Change “it’s acting” to “she’s acting”
3m54s Cut the whole “fire cool… I know that intellectually”
Overall: Decent job MCing up front. I could’ve done more crowd work and tried to play off the crowd a little more. The “kinda cool kinda nerd” joke at the end did really well.
Late night comedy
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L8rd0w_VXfM
2m15s I’m always confused when “I remember being on the plane misses” but the baggage check hits
3m04s Rephrase “would’ve wanted” to “wants”
Overall: Mediocre and I stumbled over the wording on my last joke.
