Category: Performance Critiques

Going last on the late night show, the few remaining audience members have been here for 2.5+ hours

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=llllWtkdBcg

3m54s Go back to saying “delicious” instead of “ferocious”

4m04s It should be twenty bucks

5m13s I need a better response for when nobody gets that it’s a fake out joke

7m24s That’s a stretch

Overall: Weak. I should’ve started this set by talking to the audience a little before going right into material, just to let them know I realize they’ve been there for a while and all that.

Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7lW1-cgefuQ

0m31s I butchered Shawn White’s last name

0m58s I didn’t sell how horrible I felt it was

1m16s Cut the science donation part

Overall: Working out some new jokes, they need work

The 8PM Show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7lW1-cgefuQ

1m56s Put more emphasis on “Berlin Wall”

3m00s Look the same way for the second pose

4m06s Great in the moment response

5m58s Stepped on a laugh, slow down

Overall: Solid but I need to slowdown on the Netflix joke

A 8PM Show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=33r0hHwWZ-k

0m24s Say “Hi Girls” then pause then say the line

2m09s Add on to it with “do a line in the bathroom”

3m03s Milk the modeling for longer

4m56s Change “All I did” to “All you do”

6m10s Sell the dodging around more

7m28s Good save

Overall: I lost them on the last two jokes. The “you were no accident” joke needs fixing.

A 6:30 PM Show for a crowd of 10-15

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l7DHjjqLzV4

0m22s After throwing my hand up, turn to the other side of the audience while holding the “what the hell?” look

2m34s Look at the same person while striking poses

3m06s Change it back to “Jesus wants you to…”

4m27s Change my voice for him

5m49s Change it “so it’s worth it”

Overall: Solid for the size of the audience but I could’ve ended a stronger.