The 8PM show a light crowd of about 20 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m_fkzOSqSSg
0m28s Make the premise clearer
0m56s Add the words “like me” after philosophy major
1m18s Ask “have you been like that for everyone? I thought I was special”
5m58s Don’t stutter in the middle of a punch line
7m22s I got a laugh, so the line didn’t make sense
Overall: Great set especially since it was a small crowd
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3BdQYUTWXm8
1m40s I hadn’t been on stage for two days, so I decided to do my “A” jokes just to warm up
3m32s Call them out on homophobia
Overall: Decent for a mic
Hosting my Queens show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-u3KY1a_np0
0m34s Go into the “I’m not sure what my tattoo means” for longer
1m15s Mimic her pronunciation and see if she says everything in that accent or just her name
1m58s Try changing this to “I’m hitting MY goal 100% of the time”
4m22s I haven’t asked the audience any questions yet
7m05s I should’ve started with addressing the environment
7m58s Do different poses
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jc6Lkmpw0vc
1m14s I notice I’m not higher energy than I usually am, and I need to be when hosting
2m18s Doing time between comics
3m02s Cut the clip to wall line
4m00s All my improvised lines are getting bigger laughs than the material, so I should improvise more, especially when hosting
6m18s Great call back
8m15s Nice try getting the couple to stop sucking face
8m56s Rework the first two lines of the shoes joke
Overall: Not great but not terrible. I need to go way higher in my energy and delivery when hosting.
Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YUHXahFZQSs
0m38s I might want to turn the last thirty seconds into a one liner about spelling ineligible
1m45s The line should’ve been “easy to service”
2m17s The second part of that joke is too blue
Overall: Working out new jokes, they need work
The 8PM Show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lCdH_po2wOY
0m21s Better to ask “really, that’s an O?” instead of telling them
1m03s Rephrase to “that means four years of your life weren’t flushed down the toilet”
2m42s Put more emphasis on “freezing”
3m28s I should’ve added one more comment
4m45s Get rid of “your”
Overall: Good but not great set, the Netflix joke went really well to close.
