A music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JSlckYEcgsA
0m50s Say “I’ve been looking for a new phone and”
2m15s Say a name smoothly
2m56s This joke needs work but has potential
4m48s This joke needs work
5m12s Make it more clear that this is hypothetical
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kHTyubIHN68
0m14s That’s funny
Overall: My delivery was nice and relaxed, the newer jokes still need work but this was as fun as a mic gets.
MCing a bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEvKQElywZA
0m53s Good misinterpretation
1m28s When I screw up the psychic stuff, I should be more upset and focus on “now they’re like, he better be funny”
1m55s I should ask them what kind of phone they got or something
2m20s Don’t blow the punch line
2m33s If the first punch line is messed up, just get out of the joke
2m58s No need to go there, I should do it as a psychic where he’s the third one, “ivy league, state school, high school drop out”
4m13s That’s funny
4m35s Try “we can all have an orgy on a first name basis” instead
6m18s Rephrase to “always wonder why she has a hunchback”
7m22s Be more specific than office
8m51s Add in, “that’s not the same thing, right”
Overall: Decent job hosting, I talked to the crowd on a bunch and only did 4 jokes in 9 minutes. I need to learn how to do my jokes with more energy when hosting…
A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-c3QVAFCz9o
1m34s Few people understand the premise of “I use ethics to justify my actions” reword this
2m10s This might be better off as a one liner
5m21s Stepped on a laugh
5m33s Sell the “what the hell” look stronger
6m22s Shake a fist or something
Overall: I did two straight minutes of one liners for the first time in a while, it was a fun change of pace. The newer jokes up front need work.
Hosting my Queens show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tGMtGt8KuTM
0m50s Awkward but necessary to get it to stop
1m36s Good call, go into it further
2m24s More emphasis on “MY”
3m22s Make a downhill motion with my hand on “flushed down the toilet”
4m22s Hit the “I’m not in an office as an animator” harder you can’t animate outside
5m05s Add “so you will be working in IT”
7m11s Don’t lean back on a punch line
8m11s Scan my eyes from side to side more
9m34s Change “catch” to “watch”
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qOKeGQQ76w8
2m52s Cut or change these last two lines
3m18s It’s supposed to be “easy to service”
Overall: Good job only doing one joke in the first five minutes of hosting. My energy level could still be a little higher but I did a better job of talking to the crowd.
The 8PM Show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VnATVFTzPgw
0m22s Change my voice for that act out
0m36s It doesn’t make sense to say “kid” and then have him use my name
1m08s It was supposed to be “a soft degree”
2m36s Have a funnier call out
3m27s Try “til you throw a number, or a dollar”
5m24s Say it’s like “dancing waterfalls” or “jumping waterfalls”
5m51s Say my line of “I’m a stand up comic, not a stand up guy” when that joke doesn’t land
Overall: Average and some wording needs to be adjusted.
