Going towards the end of the 7pm show
httpv://youtu.be/ymsrzlvfLuQ
0m30s Joke might work without the word “probably” in there
3m18s Open eyes wider for the blinks
4m39s Smile during the first two examples
Overall: On the weak side of average, had laughs but not that many big laughs
Checks during the 10pm show
httpv://youtu.be/xv7xssFBDAY
3m00s At least try a save line
3m50s Say this smoothly
Overall: Horrible even for checks. Should’ve tried crowd work.
Checks during the 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/SHQF9HzGf1U
2m17s It should be “don’t” instead of “didn’t”
4m39s Needs a better punch line
5m55s Cut the horny line
6m14s Say that more playfully
Overall: Great set for checks, good set without the curve
The 10pm show
httpv://youtu.be/sveeTLtvyXw
2m52s Seem more upset about it
4m05s Slight pause after “woah”
7m39s Say the “calls me up right after” line slower so I can get the mic properly adjusted
Overall: Good consistent set
The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/GRYEgn0tITc
0m50s Make going into material feel more seamless
4m52s Good honest save line
6m06s Cut the horny line
6m34s Might be worth reusing “I’m not gonna change for you”
Overall: Average to poor.
