Another open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ziogFIGNZw8
2m42s Say “carbon fiber” smoother
4m22s Say “you’re all” instead of “this side of the room”
Overall: Weak but it got a little better at the end.
Performance Critique: February 9a
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0y7c4gjaxmI
4m58s No need to say “for a day”
Overall: Average to weak response for a mic.
Performance Critique: February 8b
A 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S5H5yoNBI_Q
1m42s Great response to the comment
1m56s Good job following instincts while staying in character
6m24s It should be “louder” instead of “harder”
Overall: Great set. This is the first time getting heckled actually helped me get bigger laughs.
Performance Critique: February 8a
Doing a regular set on my Astoria show for about 8 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kPjWrWEMFqk
0m35s Say the OJ line before anything else if someone says something before I start
4m58s This happens often with this character, where some people won’t make eye contact, decent idea to call it out. Maybe, “Why won’t you look at me? Don’t you think I’m attractive?”
8m59s Say “do not” instead of “don’t”
Overall: Weak showing. A couple of audience members enjoyed the character and rest hated it.
Performance Critique: February 7
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HGQtDIArVvg
0m15s Hold the mic at my side for an extra second
5m33s Cut the Peace Prize line
Overall: Weak response, even for a mic.
