An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BuUlU9l_xMs
1m54s Do a crazy laugh stop after this line
3m59s Lean forward when saying the punch line
4m38s Sound happier about having brought mine
6m49s Cut the “and all of August” tag
Overall: I should be a little more playful while acting insane.
Late night at the music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=00ApYJ52RrI
5m55s I need to find a way to hide where this is going, maybe just say it faster
6m22s Cut “some people are so self centered”
8m37s Try adding in, “weirdo”
9m48s The laugh stop is really effective
10m38s If “chance to beg” gets a big laugh, I shouldn’t do the “for the sweet release of death” tag as there’s too long of a pause
17m36s That random flower line doesn’t make sense here, it should be after I don’t get a laugh
Overall: Great set. This is the best the crazy persona has done and the longest set I’ve done without breaking character.
A bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gpWnDg3atl0
2m28s Not sure what he said, but I guess my response worked
5m48s The delivery of “I wouldn’t knock” should be different
Overall: Weak set. As of now, this character either does really well or really bad.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g2oSPAEQ0-4
4m01s Nice to see a new tag working
Overall: Great response especially for a mic
Doing a spot for 8-10 people at a bowling alley show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UUqzkPFD2qc
2m22s First decent laugh
3m46s Laugh for a little longer
5m11s Say “whole” instead of “entire”
5m25s Be a little more playful while maintaining the psycho thing
6m25s Fully sit down first before changing my voice, and take off the gloves
9m20s After a couple of jokes didn’t hit in this voice, I should’ve done crowd work
11m18s Decent improvised line
Overall: I bombed. I did try going in and out of the psycho character for the first time and it doesn’t look too awkward, although it’s a bit forced going back into it. I need to find an effective way to change between normal and crazy.
