Category: Performance Critiques

The 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/sB7yMD-ufEE

0m38s Doesn’t sound conversational yet

1m02s Good pause

4m28s Head went down a little late and out of sync

Overall: Slow first minute but then got on a good roll

Late night at a comedy and music mic, after a six minute intro

httpv://youtu.be/3Gfr_pelJKE

4m39s The camp one is weak, cut it

5m13s I can start the “glo” sound before interrupting

6m10s Cut the American dream part

6m54s The tickets to America is weak, cut it

8m03s Cut the fired at line

Overall: Really good set and good job taking my time to ease into material.

Opening the 7pm show

httpv://youtu.be/KfjxQExPe-M

2m44s Set this up slightly clearer

3m55s Open eyes wider during blinks

4m14s That’s also not the right punch line there

6m03s They high fived, kinda funny

6m16s Try saying “for our first date” more seductively

Overall: Steady but weak laughs.

Opening the 7:30 show

httpv://youtu.be/UTszIOJqEFw

1m05s Good in room awareness to add the “proud of it” comment

1m41s The “maybe” should be whispered more

3m59s Last name line doesn’t work either

5m08s I should say “don’t awww” and go right into it instead of “yeah”

Overall: Average set. Got steady laughs throughout but not many huge laughs.

Going up 2.5 hours into a show for 8 remaining people

httpv://youtu.be/XjBmbnFW2iQ

1m18s Really no reason for that aside

2m07s Say “DAP” first then explain it

2m34s Warning the audience it’ll be rougher is a fun way to tone it down a little

3m28s I should do just talking to the audience more often

Overall: Ok for late night. The new entitlement joke needs work but has potential.