Performance Critique: February 24a

Hosting the second half of an open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p7Qs81al6ow

0m03s I decided to try out being brought up as a character name

2m12s Nice job being in the moment

2m24s When a joke gets interrupted, just bail on it

4m07s It should be “large” not “good”

Overall: Average open mic response.

Performance Critique: February 23b

Going last on a bar show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B6He3U6A9dQ

1m39s Say “inflation” in a bit more of a throwaway fashion

3m27s Adding “I felt bad” might help the surprise of the punch line

6m40s It’s nice when an improvised line from a previous night works as material the next night

8m23s The “you’d never date” line should be in my normal voice

10m42s The start of the sentence should be different from “if you don’t laugh” cause I said that earlier, maybe “if you keep staring at me”

Overall: Solid set, and the voice went in and out more or less smoothly.

Performance Critique: February 23a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QQvE5DMTjDY

1m35s Say “usually” instead of “kinda”

4m50s The warning line should be in my regular voice

5m14s Do a better job miming the balloon animal process

6m04s Say “knock knock” in my regular voice and respond in the crazy voice

Overall: Decent for a mic, but I should adjust what lines are used in which voice

Performance Critique: February 22b

A 10pm show for a few people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r1uGLUvBQ20

2m12s Say this within the first minute of the set

4m43s Always nice when an improvised line gets a (small) applause break

7m35s Try saying “bring it” in the crazy voice

9m45s Don’t switch voices mid character

11m15s No need for a second save line in a row when the first one got a good laugh

Overall: Great set but I need to fine tune which parts use which voice.

Performance Critique: February 23c

Going last on a music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GgQEfGs9_BA

2m20s Wait for all the laughs to stop before saying “inflation”, especially since it’s a one word punch line

2m55s Maybe address how the voice sounds but don’t do the examples right away

4m25s The “if” part of that sentence didn’t make sense

4m39s Do the “you people are making me feel uncomfortable” line before the “cut the tension line”

7m25s Use the crazy voice for the entire sentence

9m31s Ask the question in my normal voice

Overall: Very up and down. The first minute of room observations completely missed, the next few minutes of jokes hit, then I got interrupted by a heckle mid joke and didn’t have a great comeback and lost them for a bit, then I got them back, then I lost them again.

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