An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NU0KsULugXc
1m42s It should be “I don’t” not “you don’t”
4m43s This is a good idea but needs to be worded better
Overall: Average response for a mic.
Performance Critique: February 25b
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0BA-PEjFIyk
0m43s I don’t like this “I feel like laughing” so early in the set
2m27s Look at that table for the time between those two lines
Overall: On video it sounds like a decent set, but in actuality one table loved the character and the rest of the room hated it (or at least didn’t laugh much).
Performance Critique: February 25a
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XAqPstpWDuM
4m07s Try “O indeed” instead of “yeah”
6m04s Rephrase to “too bad her life insurance was so high”
Overall: The last two minutes went much better than the first five
Performance Critique: February 24c
A late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jeXgmHncFcY
1m20s Try the metal rod line before the birthday line
4m22s Should’ve opened with that line
5m36s Try not to laugh during the whispering
8m36s Change the emphasis in that sentence
11m17s Add “nationwide” before “tour”
13m48s Change the ending of this joke
Overall: Decent laughs for most of the set but lost steam doing all new jokes at the end.
Performance Critique: February 24b
A bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g3jKxSFcLZ0
4m12s Try “my shrink says I should tell people how I feel”
Overall: I got low but steady laughs throughout
