Closing out a 10PM show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h8QdtLvyioY
3m18s Good job improvising and calling out a situation
6m59s Weak joke good save
9m46s Great acknowledgement line
10m53s Cut the motor scooter joke
11m11s Cut the yoga line
12m22s Great improvised description
15m56s Pause after “Jewish Christmas”
Overall: A couple new jokes missed in the middle but otherwise a very solid 17 minute set.
Doing a spot on my Queens show with 8 audience members
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7yaCW1TfM-k
0m38s I love when the mic goes in and out
4m21s Pause another second to add to the randomness of the puppies statement
8m06s The electric fence line should be in the crazy voice
Overall: Respectable set for a small crowd.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aRY66zbDIjg
1m41s Laugh for a second longer
4m20s Add on “that must mean he loves you”
Overall: Solid set with strong laughs throughout.
Going up 2.5+ hours into the show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i41q1pKIGok
6m24s Figure out a better line than “has woken up the next morning”
Overall: Great set with consistently strong laughs throughout.
Another mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K52K50bA_0w
3m08s Say “I hate flying first class” in my normal voice, or even better, cut this joke
5m42s Reword and tighten her criticisms
Overall: The new mom joke has potential but needs work.
