A show for 54 Irish high school students and their chaperones
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EdsVjBkx8e0
0m39s Change this to “I laughed too”
0m45s Say “we’re not friends” more excitedly
6m04s Good improv line that could become a normal line
Overall: Great set. Also great to know young foreign (native English) audiences find the bipolar psycho act funny.
Going up early at the music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hha_N78XmuI
2m13s Second and third part of this needs work
2m38s This needs a stronger line than knitting sweaters
3m40s Say “gruesome” instead of “horrifying”
4m22s Cut this
4m34s Cut or rework the hotel bit
5m05s Cut the wall to wall funerals
5m28s Pause after “don’t worry”
5m40s The “alone” line should be in the crazy voice and the “dangerous out there” in the normal voice
6m15s Try the setup in the crazy voice too
6m48s That’s new and a keeper
7m15s Cut the cocker spaniel line
8m00s Nice to see it start working really well the third time I try this joke
Overall: Two of my newest jokes got applause breaks and four or five fell flat, so that’s a win.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O3NbPy2NukE
1m14s Good instant response
2m27s Cut the sense of humor line
3m36s Cut the yoga
4m25s Say “broke” instead of “impoverished”
Overall: Working out new jokes
A check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ya-74n456Dk
0m26s No need for “I got you”
3m54s Lean forward a little more
4m27s Should’ve done the dogs bit here
Overall: It started okay and then went downhill. The last 3 minutes were painful even for a check spot.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=owvitzu469Y
1m20s This is the new two lines of the joke, they’re decent
1m37s Say “hell” instead of “fuck”
2m25s Make it “unsolved mysteries”
3m27s Say “shrink” instead of “psychologist”
4m05s The mom should just be “back to school”
5m44s First line should be “you not scary”
Overall: Working out mostly new stuff, it needs work
