The 8pm show for a small audience
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zIKJ69PsOv8
0m36s Don’t address the voices right after
5m24s The hand should come back down on the hip on the third “ha”
Overall: Up and down, with a little more down than up.
Performance Critique: March 25a
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Llk4OdLu8c
1m22s Different setup for an old joke that never worked
4m59s Sync the hand motion with the words
5m57s Good call back at the end
Overall: Standard open mic response.
Performance Critique: March 24c
Late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8C-08eqNFR4
4m26s Don’t say “today” twice in the sentence
5m08s Say it in my normal voice
8m09s Scan the whole room before saying that line
10m32 Say it in my normal voice
Overall: Good. The new mom bit is coming along.
Performance Critique: March 24b
A show in NJ
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=APOKbbK_SKM
2m55s Going a little fast, pause between the mom lines
5m22s I should’ve addressed all the talking in the back by now
6m54s I should’ve addressed the weak response much sooner
7m05s Should be doing crowd work much sooner when it’s going like this
Overall: The first sentence I said got a big laugh and so did the last sentence. Everything in between was a struggle and I didn’t connect with the audience.
Performance Critique: March 24a
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0bJJcpJ8xdE
1m48s Lean forward more
3m49s Slow down the hand motions
Overall: Decent for the first four minutes, then I lost them
