Check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://youtu.be/-0Wc7P7F_Iw
1m48s Don’t do the poke on “do your homework”
2m07s Cut the drop motion
4m12s Film studies isn’t a punch line
5m10s Try delivering the DAP lines smiling
5m39s Shot is a shorter word than beheaded
6m33s Weird way to start this bit.
Overall: Mediocre set (that at least started and ended decently) and the new bit needs lots of work.
Hosting the 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/oN2dlrMI5eY
5m16s Not sure why I went into this joke, this joke shouldn’t see the light of day til 12-15 minutes into a set
6m27s Good quick response
6m40s Might want to say Russian again since a bunch of people came in after my first bit
8m05s Don’t guess Jersey a third time
8m57s Do the hand grab then the line
Overall: Good job talking to the audience without material for a lot of the time. The response was good until people kept streaming in, at which point it got a little disjointed.
After 2am at a music and comedy mic
httpv://youtu.be/NUH6fqnf_TI
2m16s Hand moving out from the body instead of across the body looks more natural
2m44s Resay “a DAP is the guy…” at the start of the sentence
3m57s Might be funnier to say “beheaded” instead of “put to death”
4m39s Cut the chance line
7m04s Not sure about the bed bugs line
11m58s Eyes should be darting around more
Overall: Working out mostly newer stuff. Up and down response as expected.
An 8pm variety show
httpv://youtu.be/F40DhG1Kx4g
0m20s Good job playing off the unique situation
2m05s The “death to call” line can be rewritten stronger
4m42s The “for marriage” line needs to be stronger
Overall: Very strong and consistent set. A couple lines need tightening but this is how my sets should go 90% of the time. Changing the opening joke may have helped things too.
Going up 2.5+ hours into the show
httpv://youtu.be/aMIN79EvaJE
1m43s I could do better than “curl up in ball” but the rhyme idea is on
2m29s Get rid of “I feel that” just go right into it
2m40s Try to deliver it without the anger/frustration, but more playful
3m40s Get the first syllable of “global” going first
4m01s Rewrite the one room part
4m24s Find a better ending for self entitled, the self referential isn’t doing it
4m51s Pause before “and so is my sister”
Overall: Strong start, then I did a new joke that needs work
