Category: Comedy

Doing a longer set on the 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xuj1lZ5FktM

1m35s Nice improvised bit

3m15s Address the groan and applause by different parts of the audience right after it happened, not twenty seconds later

4m58s No need for “too” at the end of the sentence

6m53s The psycho smile should show teeth at all times

11m10s Do a little crowd work or normal bit instead of going into a character when there’s a weird slow down

11m50s Nice to know the save line works

12m46s Hold the hand motion for a little longer

13m02s Change the delivery on “bring it”

14m34s Decent response

Overall: Good set, the first eleven minutes were stronger than the last six.

Doing a check spot on the 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sFuve6YRIz0

1m37s He took the hat off and I was right

3m22s Cut out “it’s true”

3m45s Make a bigger pointing motion on “neuro divorce”

5m08s Should’ve left on the small applause break instead of giving it one more tag

Overall: Great for a check spot

MCing the 8pm show for light crowd

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xsfr0YEJO8w

1m38s Nice adjustment

1m53s Should’ve pointed out she’s not proud of it since it took her so long to say it

3m53s Nice improvised save

4m32s Keep on the “bossy wife” angle

4m59s Try to remember better

5m07s It is funny to keep going between “I’m great at this” and “I’m horrible”

6m41s Don’t clarify

7m58s When MCing I can try to see if they’ll respond for longer before going into my bit, during normal sets I’d prefer they don’t actually respond

10m33s Cut down to “child abandonment. Her credits transferred in from life experience”

10m58s Try to end a little stronger

Overall: Decent job MCing a small show. The crowd work stuff was really going well, I should’ve done more of it, especially in between bits as the bits weren’t hitting great towards the end.

Late night music and comedy

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=djjL52QknTQ

2m27s Decent response, could’ve been stronger

3m15s Cut the word “kinda”

4m31s Cut “most”

5m19s I love this new line

6m55s Have a bigger smile

8m41s Get the leave joke in after the first two times I say leave

8m57s Make a more distinct gesture towards my face for this

Overall: Solid set. Some newer stuff worked towards the end.

A bar show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oAfDQTUxXF4

0m16s An audience member was from Russia so I addressed it right away

1m30s People walking in 30 minutes into the show

3m15s Let the sadness linger for another half second

3m40s No need for “it’s true” ruins the flow

4m03s Don’t point until “neuro”

4m30s Great delivery on this line

4m43s Rephrase this line

5m15s Slow down the line of “no, not a women’s prison”

8m00s Stop dropping my hands on punch lines, keep them up

Overall: Good set, I interwove crowd work with material pretty smoothly, and wasn’t fazed by half the audience walking in during.