Opening the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cSLqsQRsdHw
3m44s Don’t stutter and don’t throw “ma’am” into the sentence
7m15s Sell the not knowing the right answer even harder
Overall: Ok set, the laughs weren’t as loud as I would’ve liked, but they were more or less consistent.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g1kMtvMoJPg
1m24s He said “she’s my cousin”
1m43s Good job getting out of it
4m10s Good response
4m38s Great improvised line
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ebvT08ZFYjk
1m08s Good response
2m30s Literally just had a 90 second debate about if I’m using the movie title, handled it well though
4m50s Weird place to go into this bit
6m24s Say “my birthday” one less time in that sentence
6m58s Address that he got sad about my birthday
8m41s Do the hand motion first then say “you have that glow”
Overall: Good set with strong laughs. There was a lot of off the cuff improvising and back and forth with the audience. Possibly a little too much as things went to crazy town more than once, but I had fun.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WuWds23jMTs
0m37s Change the tone on the question
1m31s Good improvising
2m24s It should be “everything is open” not “my taste in restaurants”
3m35s Change to “let me pick the restaurants”
Overall: Ok for a mic. Keep working on the birthday stuff.
Late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4iVdT816vf0
1m53s That’s actually a funny place for him to use the safe word
2m32s Make this point first
3m56s Say “I only remember her chunky” at the start
4m30s Cut “linner” line
4m43s Word this better
Overall: Great set doing just new material. I remembered the order of my new stuff this time, and it went over well.
Going first on a show for ten audience members
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bgASFUSD3ho
0m22s Don’t call them dicks if they don’t laugh
0m30s Don’t go up on “air quotes”
1m02s Doesn’t make sense to do the eye thing if they don’t think it’s contagious
1m42s Should’ve done that line up front during the commenting on what already happened
2m16s Smile on that line
3m04s I should’ve done a choking “check box” act out
3m58s It should be “holes” not “hole”
5m30s Reverse the sentence, “maybe you wouldn’t be such a fat ass, if you let me pick the restaurant”
7m01s First time that line hasn’t worked
7m39s Say “but I’m gonna end on checkbox”
Overall: I got a laugh in the first ten seconds and pretty much bombed after that. There were maybe 2 or 3 other laughs, but this was the worse set I’ve had in a while.
