Category: Comedy

Hosting the writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yHlGGwd1hoM

0m32s Maybe say “I finally know how to keep my friends close and my enemies closer”

3m48s Instead of “harder” it should be “more expensive”

Overall: Average mediocre mic response

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BO7IPTx3KZk

1m01s Change the intonation on the line, emphasize “I”

1m44s I bailed on a bunch of the bit in the middle, remember the whole thing

2m36s Good job addressing the talking

3m02s If I’m not opening with this, I should notice someone eating food to be reminded of this

6m06s No need for “you” before “dick”

9m00s Give them another half second before doing the next bit

10m13s Good job addressing it

Overall: This set seemed much better on video than it felt in person.

Late night music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VNmgbswKDwM

1m18s Good response

3m22s Nice when new parts hit hard

4m50s I could’ve played off his “I’ll probably get murdered” statement a lot harder

5m27s Make it 24 hours, not 48

6m40s That’s my favorite move of all time, knocking on wood after “I didn’t grow up in jersey”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2UyfZg8DW1k

0m38s Handling the interruptions well although they’re getting more annoying

2m43s Instead of married say wife

3m20s It’s stupid but funny

4m51s That’s the best that line has worked to date

5m04s Say drapes instead of curtains

Overall: Great set, real good response for the newer stuff

Hosting the second half of a mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KVuxwta_dtQ

0m56s Restate that it was last year

4m18s Don’t stumble

4m57s Reword that into one coherent sentence

5m15s Doing more time towards the end

6m14s Find a better intro into that

6m58s Nice tag on the save line

Overall: Ok for a mic

A 10pm show for ten people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v5VjAvxglaY

2m11s Say “I also come from a broken home” instead of “my family is also broken”

Overall: Good fun set for a small audience, and I did a brand new joke which got an ok response but still needs work