Going first on a 4:30pm show
httpv://youtu.be/pbtN1Ka47k4
0m28s Don’t say “good start”
1m28s Make “maybe” sound more threatening
2m04s Slow down the plane line
2m39s Call out the “ooh” as that line doesn’t deserve it
4m15s Should’ve done a save line before going into a new bit
Overall: Started out ok-ish then got weaker. Go to save lines sooner and don’t hold back from doing actual crowd work even if it’s a short set.
Going first on a 2pm show
httpv://youtu.be/4HrBXDi0dNk
4m21s Don’t switch hands on the mic for the two characters, it takes too long
5m26s Keep the mic distance the same
6m23s That’s the weakest the birthday song has closed in a while
Overall: Solid but not great, and the Birthday bit at the end wasn’t as strong as it usually is.
The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/zoahUHZWILY
0m32s Instead of “what we’re doing” go with “what we’re working with”
4m02s Don’t stumble on the words
4m25s Don’t move my eyes so quickly
5m17s Don’t move my eyes so quickly on the side to side
6m10s It didn’t seem random enough, maybe say “hi” to her first
6m54s I forgot the end to this joke
7m02s Don’t switch hands on the circle
7m18s This bit goes better if I remember to put the mic in the stand for it
9m48s The mouth line needs rework
9m58s So does the new affectionate line
10m06s Good improvised call back
Overall: Good at the start and end but the anti marriage stuff didn’t hit as well as usual.
The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/UiJKw2nCT1E
2m45s I confused the order but it still worked. Should be “Bill and a six pack”
4m01s I forgot the last part of the cell phone like marriage bit
4m22s Rework the “what’s next” part
5m02s No need to make it “sister’s” infant, just an infant
6m26s Try a slight pause after “so”
7m18s I hate that this is the line that gets an applause break
7m54s Funny cause this happened a week or two ago, and I made a good guess about it
8m58s Don’t change hands where I keep the mic for the two characters
10m07s Pause for an extra half second before “I’m allergic to nuts”
Overall: Good set of doing mostly newer material without setting it up with the older material.
Going up around 3am at a music and comedy mic
httpv://youtu.be/3FQvqb84ihY
0m55s People were talking so when it’s this late, I just wait til they stop
1m20s If I get that kind of weak/little response I can say “that’s how I felt about it too”
2m55s Change “pretty one” to “blonde one”
6m58s It should be “he tells me” instead of “he goes”
8m43s Hit “12th century” harder
Overall: Decent for the time of night. The new bit at the end wasn’t as strong as the slightly older stuff.
