Category: Comedy

Going up towards the end of an 8:30 show for 8 or 10 people

httpv://youtu.be/FV3xpzskE3w

0m48s Cut the “we’re gonna have fun” line

Overall: Pretty terrible. Barely got any laughs and I didn’t try to bring them in with crowd work.

Going up second with a particularly chatty audience

httpv://youtu.be/61-NwMIM7HI

0m52s Emphasize the word “AND”

4m54s Don’t go up on the word “mom”

5m30s I missed the end of that joke about “now she’s looking at me like ‘maybe I do wanna marry you’”

6m03s Get more worked up

Overall: Not a great set but did a decent job dealing with all the talking and interruptions.

Going up last 2.5 hours into a show

httpv://youtu.be/UZ-kndgFbp0

0m08s Don’t start out with putting that thought in their head

0m49s Need a better line for if they disagree with me

1m29s Sell the woah harder

2m57s Sell the “just cause”

3m02s Avoid the getting smart comments

4m12s Say “turned into” instead of just “is”

4m21s If the Russian stuff missed that bad, I probably shouldn’t have gone into more of it

5m20s Try to stay in tune for the end of it

5m29s It got a laugh no need to say “it went nowhere”

Overall: Started out okay enough but got weird and low response for the two Russian bits at the end.

Towards the end of an 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/AromsSvtA50

1m30s Move eyes side to side slower

5m03s Instead of “this vicious cycle” say “MY vicious cycle”

5m20s Remember to the put mic stand back in to do a better hula hoop

6m42s Fifth and sixth year should be on the same hand

6m58s No need to point this out when I get a good laugh

8m28s Learn to pause after “sometimes” if a big laugh comes

8m38s Don’t stutter on the line

9m20s Nice improvised line

Overall: Good set.

The Sunday Writer’s Mic

httpv://youtu.be/OSyXjpyW7x4

3m04s Fix or reword the multiple carriers part

3m39s Don’t pause between kiss and on the mouth

3m50s Or just cut this whole part

Overall: Decent for a mic but the lines I’ve changed still need work