Category: Comedy

An open mic

httpv://youtu.be/CBeHxrR0Sis

1m29s Pause between “south east branch” and “west campus”

3m53s Make it like I’m hitting a buzzer before answering

4m20s Tighten wording

Overall: Standard weak mic response

Going up though checks on an 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/Tizx2TXE7eQ

1m29s Cut that line

2m21s I can add in “notice that doesn’t ring true for the Asians with the three majors”

3m33s Might be funny to specify the job

4m23s Pause after “so”

5m17s Punch up the parents talking, but it’s a funny idea

9m01s Slow down the “just because” to articulate each word

11m06s That’s the proper way of skipping past a weird “where are you from answer” and then going into my bit

14m56s Good job dealing with it, could’ve mentioned how “PhD” isn’t a real doctor, which was his question

16m12s Say “yeah, I was as excited as you” instead

17m07s Cut the unconditional love line

17m22s Sing it more and worse

Overall: Good for a check spot

The 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/AaxqWSeJbO8

0m06s Say “thank you” or “hi” first

2m06s Say the line smoothly

3m26s Add “in this country” after “make a difference”

3m52s Give it another second before saying it got preachy

5m33s Might want to slow down the candle part

Overall: Good short set

Going first at a bar show for 10 or so people

httpv://youtu.be/z_ETRXNkieI

1m59s Say “role model” instead of competition

3m15s Better to ease into this bit with continued crowd work if the flow is already interrupted

5m43s More emphasis on second “ever”

6m46s Decent save line

9m00s Strongly consider cutting the unconditional love line, it rarely works

Overall: Decent for going first for a small crowd. Couple of light applause breaks and consistent low laughs.

Going up last at a music and comedy mic for 8 or so people

httpv://youtu.be/p52A0-30j5Y

6m27s Find better word for the coverage line

6m55s The settle down is much weaker than what I previously had

8m21s Don’t stumble on the line

9m52s More emphasis on the word “animal”

10m20s Say “your host” before the name

Overall: Eh. I had low consistent laughs at the start then good consistent laughs for the last 3-5 minutes.