Going up 2.5 hours into a show
httpv://youtu.be/cOn-cXaThdE
2m54s Change delivery between “aisle” and “baggage check”
7m21s Don’t go up on “contract year”
Overall: Low consistent laughs throughout.
Performance Critique: January 21c
Doing a check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://youtu.be/6jdKhjBbzBo
0m52s More emphasis on “someone”
1m10s Get better posture, neck is too far forward
1m25s I can add “I didn’t even know the internet had other websites”
3m59s Say “it’s called the contract year” before “imagine how good marriages would be in a contract year.”
4m48s Add “accidently” before started
5m34s Change “twelve” to “ten” for less syllables
Overall: Decent for checks
Performance Critique: January 21b
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0ZktTKy3A_o
0m14s Might not need to acknowledge this
0m51s More emphasis on “someone”
4m49s Good to pick one or two specific people for the batteries line
6m01s Good improvised response and good idea to ask about how long someone’s been married to go back into the bit
7m13s Say someone instead of something
7m51s I forgot a couple of lines about “if you’re lucky, life, you have a couple good orgasms then you die… Have I depressed everyone yet?” but it still sorta made sense
9m25s Harsher on “maybe”
14m03s Hit the UofP harder, like “I guess you went to…”
15m10s Smile on “basement”
15m55s Spin the media should be after bribe the jury
18m10s Weird fun interaction
18m28s Fun Q&A I guess
19m04s Compromise should go before flexible
19m27s Saying “alright” is a funny way to go into safe word
20m31s Try to have my eyes open wider when doing the grandpa character to differentiate it from the mom
21m17s Hold the smile after each line until the laughs die down, otherwise I might be stopping the laughs cause they’re waiting for the next line
21m58s I can cut the candle part
22m46s Hold for an extra half second
Overall: Great long set. I was relaxed and had fun and the material flowed.
Performance Critique: January 21a
A 4pm show
httpv://youtu.be/cN2Ak5yb6yc
5m53s It got enough laughs that I didn’t need to acknowledge the second round of laughs
Overall: Consistent laughs throughout, but they could’ve been stronger.
Performance Critique: January 20b
A 10pm show (with the camera/audio far away)
httpv://youtu.be/PnzTevN7xuE
1m30s Good misinterpretation on her “excuse me”
1m51s Milk the circle motion for longer if it’s getting laughs
3m57s State that it’s called a contract year
5m03s I accidentally did this bit instead of the cell phones like marriages bit, but it actually helps break up the anti-marriage material
6m04s Have the mic in the stand before doing the one liner
Overall: Solid short set, although you can’t tell from this audio version
