Category: Comedy

This is a 1am prom show the same night as the previous two shows. I got on stage around 2:30 in the morning. There was a crowd of about fifty people and I actually had adrenaline pumping for the first time in a long time 

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4jb_4_OOB0o

0m41s I love larger crowds 

0m51s Wrong tonality for “I cant play tennis drunk” 

0m59s I’m talking too quickly here 

3m10s No need to comment on it 

4m32s It really did throw me off 

4m52s I didn’t mean to do this joke when I wrote out my set list before hand, I meant to finish on the snuggle slut joke 

5m24s Don’t use the word “bam” 

5m38s The remote line has to go, if it doesn’t get a laugh with 50 people 

5m51s That’s awesome that I told the prom dates to pull out 

Overall: I did pretty well and I would’ve killed it if I didn’t do the wrong joke to close it. I wish I had a large crowd every night to test out my material, as you can be more confident something works or doesn’t work when you have fifty people around

This is the 10:30 show, I hosted, there were ten people in the audience.

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bfJWPy3_UBo 

0m27s I try to do a little crowd work before getting into a joke when I host 

1m33s This is the loudest laugh I’ve ever heard as a host 

1m55s Add on “cause nobody’s watching” 

2m18s I really wish I could’ve thought of bigger words to say the same thing 

4m06s I’m continuing to try to mix in crowd work with jokes 

4m38s I didn’t realize how great of a transition I just had from crowd work to material 

4m57s I missed the word “convention” 

5m06s I seriously don’t know about other countries freedom of speech laws 

5m22s I’m asking more of my material in the form of questions than I usually do 

6m20s Great joke about being twelve. If I get a groan about the myspace joke I should say “since you’re all child molesters, I should’ve mentioned I’m actually twelve” 

7m47s Good bit of improv I should keep around next time I host 

9m00s I decided to leave out “snuggle head” because it was seven females and one guy 

9m19s I need more emphasis on “tubes” to close it stronger 

Overall: I try to believe that the crowd doesn’t make a difference and that if you’re funny, you can win over any crowd. However, this is the same night as the previous set, with around the same number of people, and I did the same jokes that I did in the previous show but the response was much better. It’s also interesting that I hosted in this set and was up in the middle of the show during the last set. I guess this means I’m at the level of stand up where I can only get a good response from certain crowds and not others

This is back in NYC, an 8:30 show on a Friday night. I wound up doing 3 sets tonight. This first one had about ten audience members. 

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-mAiuq7SrXs

0m38s Point down when I say “this” 

1m45s The background noise you hear is the sound whenever the door opens as there’s a bar area right outside the comedy room 

3m22s The old “my jokes aren’t working, let’s comment on the crowd” routine

5m01s I missed the shotglass and the snuggle head bits on purpose because I got the light and had to cut time

5m22s Surprisingly good laugh on the callback considering the set didn’t go hot

Overall: I don’t think I did anything significantly different in my delivery but the big laughs just weren’t there. I guess I could’ve been more conversational since it was a smaller crowd. The bright spot is that my callback worked, so at least I ended strong.

There were 5 audience members.

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DRiEQLjqdoc

0m37s Very chatty audience members 

1m58s Everytime I remember to do the “you turned to each other and said ‘your tubes are kinda large’” it gets a good laugh, but I tend to forget to do this line 

2m42s Deliver this line more sarcastically 

3m05s My new joke isn’t working, but it is keeping the chatty audience engaged 

3m22s Great transition to jump out of the joke and into another one, and it got the audience to quiet down 

3m51s I said “myspace” too harshly, it should be delivered much softer 

4m05s And I managed to get back to the joke I had originally wanted to transition to from the bagel bit 

5m49s There’s some spots where you have to ignore whatever the audience is saying, or the punch line just won’t work 

6m07s Stop using the “I wont have kids until I run out of material for jokes” line, or reword it a lot 

7m15s The two comparisons of the unemployment office need work 

7m48s I missed the word “sign” in that joke 

8m15s I think my drinking water on stage makes the set more low key and conversational 

8m37s True story, no joke 

9m04s This is the first time ever that “it’s all downhill after the stand up” got a laugh… of course, this is the first time that “jumping into an orgy” didn’t get a laugh 

9m35s Don’t say the word “bam” 

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vlKtGVfWHfw

0m37s I think this is as good as one can do with 5 audience members 

1m07s I need to incorporate “if you’re over forty, think of your yearbook photo” into this joke 

1m40s The Halloween outfit still needs work 

2m28s I should’ve repeated the punch line to test the theory 

2m55s I stumbled over my first punch line 

2m58s Great comeback from the audience member “how did your pole feel about that” 

3m50s I need a better punch line that gets the same point across 

4m20s I need a better end then saying the word “home” again 

5m25s I love being propositioned on stage 

5m35s And misinterpreting it on purpose 

6m08s The callback takes 1.5 seconds to get a laugh, I need to be patient and confident when delivering it 

Overall: Considering it was just 5 audience members, I did really well. I managed to keep a chatty crowd under control, and got some really big laughs. This was also a fifteen plus minute set, which I don’t’ always get a chance to do. And I like drinking water on stage to slow down my delivery and be more conversational.

This is back in DC. I hosted the show. There were 3 audience members.

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TLT6BdMfYo4

0m50s I didn’t notice they were audience members, but once I did, I started doing all my jokes for them and ignoring the heckler

1m13s When it’s a mostly male audience, I won’t open with the “he’s a comic, he should be a model” line 

1m39s Point down at the floor when I say “this”

2m12s Not bad for on the spot, if I may say so myself 

2m44s Keep my hand in the “cupped” position for the repetition of “that takes balls” 

3m49s This is what it would sound like if I wrote all my jokes on stage 

4m25s I may need a better comeback than “you’re special” for when someone has a dog with reproductive organs and feels the need to share it 

5m08s First time trying this line… didn’t work, it messes up the flow 

5m45s I need a longer pause between “third time this week” and “a dog was…” 

6m11s That cracked me up re-listening to it even if noone else laughed 

7m23s That is the most pimping answer someone can give 

7m57s Get rid of the “you’ve never seen stand up” line 

8m22s The “she gets the remote” line just doesn’t cut it 

9m33s It could work to find an audience member and address them to start the joke: “you look like a pimp. You know when a girl says “lets go over my place…”” 

I don’t know where the rest of this clip went 

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JO1p5RIohQM

I did a joke in between the comics

1m00s Stronger tone on “office”

1m38s I missed saying “that also kills with the republicans”

Overall: Considering it was a three person audience, and two of them were sitting forty feet away, I killed. The best takeaway from this set (which I only got while reviewing it for the blog) is to try addressing that someone looks like a pimp during my “snuggle slut” closing joke.