Performance Critique: April 16a

An open mic with 6 or 7 comics in the room

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9wvl4k_ovSs

0m10s I was introduced as “the headliner” which at an open mic, means, the last comic. But I pretended like I was a real headliner by saying “clap it up for all the other comics” so it got a laugh

1m06s The background noise is in another room because this is in a bar, I can’t control or really address that background noise

2m52s Put more emphasis on “kills”

3m26s Try slowing down and emphasizing each of the letters in PhD

5m14s Do the model voice right away, not after the first line

5m58s I’m trying to reword this joke

Overall: I worked out the new version of my “A” material, I just needed to say it out loud in front of a few people

Performance Critique: April 15c

A music open mic at 2am

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pE9kWdAHWTM

1m18s I ignored the yell out cause responding would ruin the rhythm of the joke and then went back to address him later

2m55s Interesting how the applause didn’t start until 3 seconds after my punch line

4m12s I’ve found this is the best way to address the Carrot Top thing

4m26s I don’t need the mom character to always be poking

5m47s Kill the “disappoint your parents” joke, if it doesn’t get a laugh during this set, it’s really not funny

6m52s Kill the Fred Astaire joke

7m31s Don’t even say “there’s no joke there”

8m18s Such a random “I like you” it’s hysterical

9m20s Do the “I’m a stand up comic, not a stand up guy” line after the “actually love my dad” bit, not “did it get too real?”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8T9OxaQETR8

0m54s Perfect delivery on the last line

Overall: I love this place. I always done well and it’s an honest reaction, so when something doesn’t work here, I get rid of it or change it.

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Performance Critique: April 15b

Doing a check spot for an audience of 15

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y6XTqr-7Xtk

0m15s Not the usual intro, but I find it’s necessary for the check spot

1m50s Do a bigger celebration

3m10s Do j-date before the suicide stuff

4m04s Too much poking

Overall: It went as well as most check spots can go

Performance Critique: April 15a

A small show in a restaurant basement

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ab8L3BpxTC0

0m17s Say “you spend” before listing days of the week

1m30s Pause longer after “yeah”

2m38s Do the j-date joke before the suicide joke

4m04s Too much poking, and not in the same place, figure out a way not to over do it

4m54s It should be “Hi, how are you today, we’re just wondering, what’s your opinion on…”

5m48s Explain the difference between Facebook and Yelp more

7m22s Hit “tap dancing” harder

7m31s Needs a better punch line

8m12s Instead of “everyone” it should be “you all”

Overall: My good stuff did fairly well, my newer stuff still needs work.

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