Category: Comedy

The Saturday 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0JJmjoGhKtA

2m29s I should’ve called them out on echoing me a second time

5m29s The “in the moment” comments always get the biggest laughs

Overall: Solid set

Saturday afternoon open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ff7QZA0stMw

0m21s Change “your” to “our”

2m19s Get rid of the seconds part

3m54s It should be “in the market” not “on the market”

Overall: Working out newer jokes, there wasn’t much response at this mic, but I can still see what parts can be fixed

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f-_59X6226Y

3m06s Good job getting an unscripted laugh to get out of a joke half failing

7m29s Kill the restaurant to girl comparison

7m42s Good job ending on a laugh

Overall: This was a weak set. I’m getting small laughs throughout, which is better than no laughs, but there wasn’t a single big group laugh during my set.

Opening at the 6:30 Show for 12-15 people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7I42K5eNOxc

2m59s I’m not a huge fan of this joke, but it tends to win back a crowd

5m08s Good job calling out a situation

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ZHlAscdPXM

Overall: The set had as many ups as downs, but I did a good job of calling out the situations that occurred during the set (the guy moving at the start, the “awwwing” at coke and the woman not paying attention) and most of the crowd seemed to be along for the ride.

Friday Open Mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AbGL5ojSeZg

0m27s Try to introduce this character

0m42s Say “crazy” not “murderous rage”

1m32s Commit more to the “blurry blurry dark dark” bit

3m38s After “I haven’t done it in a while” add on “and now I remember why”

Overall: The sand joke and the immigrant excuse joke both need work