Performance Critique: May 28b

The Friday night show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tbNn5L8UF2Q

3m18s That line doesn’t work there

3m38s The checks are being dropped

5m05s Change “table 3” to “I think we found the cokeheads”

7m05s Good strong laugh to end on

Overall: I had a great first 3 minutes, then the checks got dropped but I was still getting some laughs and ended strong. The ideal goal is to be so good that nobody looks at their checks until I’m done

Performance Critique: May 28a

Friday afternoon open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=esbisOcUYQY

1m53s I think I said “streets” instead of “shoes” by accident

4m39s Don’t turn back to the original person, try turning to a third person

Overall: I like to do an open mic before a show to get the bad set of the day out of the way, and I succeeded

Performance Critique: May 27b

Late night music and comedy show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y6_nH7eyf5M

2m32s The cheetos end is a keeper

5m01s Say “years” instead of “times”

6m32s It should be “screwed me over” not “screwed me”

Part 2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M8cVFKj0gvE

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M8cVFKj0gvE

Overall: Pretty decent set where I mixed in old stuff and new stuff

Performance Critique: May 27a

An afternoon open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QIZ5XonhpSA

1m30s Add on “anymore”

2m18s Put “cheetos” last

3m12s Cut the gant chart, nobody knows what I’m talking about

3m39s Cut the whole approved topics bit

5m39s Get more worked up

7m19s Keep holding the photo

Overall: The Netflix joke went over well and the uptight girlfriend needs to be shortened

Performance Critique: May 26

A mixed music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sDhF5hay33k

0m58s First time that’s gotten 3 “awwws” in a row, I should’ve called it out

3m38s It should be “intended purpose” not “intended feature”

5m48s One person really liked that joke

Overall: I remembered this going better than it went on the tape

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