Performance Critique: June 3a

An open mic with five comics there

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=geKMJedQ1eQ

1m16s Say “help her get hers” not “let her get hers”

1m58s The end of this joke is “this is how you walk six girls out of a bar”

2m26s Cut this joke

6m15s If nothing else this is good practice committing to a bit

7m55s That’s as strong of a laugh as this room could get

Overall: A room with only four other comics as audience is always tough, but I powered through and did my material

Performance Critique: June 2b

At an outdoor comedy show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LmOP8o5XRpE

1m40s Turn my head to a different person for “in the first hour”

3m49s That tag has been working really well lately

5m07s I stepped on a laugh at “no one would take credit for that”

5m31s Say “nobody believes me” twice

7m43s Cut the contract line

8m14s Instead of “go a little slower” say “take the turn a little slower”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zTh7XeGOveA

Overall: Pretty solid, I was able to get the chatty girl to be quiet and listen pretty quickly. Some jokes were stronger than others but there were laughs throughout.

Performance Critique: June 2a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PBIIxw6QVfU

1m36s The runner needs better jokes, but I like how it looks and sounds

2m36s Do an act out of a girl voice for this

3m58s Add in, “it’s only 98% my fault”

5m31s Say this line more casually and as a throw away

6m33s That’s the host’s last name

Overall: Worked out some newer jokes. The girl coming has potential and so does the jogger.

Performance Critique: June 1

MCing my Queens show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iqC6ti-B9ps

0m27s My new attempt at doing fake crowd work that’s a joke to start an MC set

2m03s That’s a funny question

6m10s At least I finally got the older bar patrons involved

9m56s This is why I do comedy and not singing

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cFt9rnuTPEo

0m34s Good little improv bit

Overall: I kept a positive and high energy attitude throughout the MCing set and had some good crowd work bits

Performance Critique: May 29

The Saturday night show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9e8ZXm5G6-Q

3m18s Gotta love when the lights get turned out

6m35s I need to word “whenever someone is” before “repeating the words”

Overall: Decent but not amazing, although the homeless guy joke is finally working

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