A music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DrlW64hm6BY
7m14s Cut the friend zone sentence
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xO9PkSGwX-0
2m02s Cut the Chekov line
Overall: Up and down set, but I got it rolling eventually
A bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=STYN6nqohk4
0m56s I could’ve added another joke about him looking into the mirror
6m40s Remember the joke if I’m gonna do it in a real show
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bsFdvH730Wo
Overall: Eh, not great not atrocious.
A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TCHOKDHIf10
1m15s Start this sentence with “If” as well so it flows better
2m17s Get rid of “He stole movie”
Overall: Decent enough for a mic
Hosting my Queens show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SajaysHY6W0
5m05s No need for “he stole whole movie”
5m31s Good job stopping with material to do some more crowd work
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q00j34xhtw8
3m09s I should’ve gone back to crowd work at least once more before brining up the first comic
3m30s Doing time between comics
4m41s Try not turning my head side to side while acting confused
7m40s Say “mundane photos” not “mundane things”
Overall: Respectable job Mcing but I should do more crowd work
Late night Monday at the club with 6 audience members left
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nwMwx57l80w
3m32s Don’t move around so quickly with the turns
4m03s That bombing line didn’t work
5m40s Pause after “he didn’t get that one either”
6m36s Pause a little longer
Overall: The first half went okay considering the crowd had been there for nearly three hours, then the laughs weren’t there as much so I started rushing my delivery. It also felt like I was talking at them at times instead of to them…
