A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2PQ1EaJZS5E
3m35s Bad joke, good save
4m17s No need to hit that line after a good laugh
5m18s Fix or stop doing the neuro joke
Overall: Decent for a mic, and I now remember why I stopped doing the neuroecon joke
MCing my Queens show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rTeQJSQZ14Q
1m39s This needs a stronger end
2m49s I should’ve gone into a joke about the Army or had everyone clap it up for him
4m22s And this is why I haven’t done this joke in six months
6m04s Go back into crowd work because jokes weren’t hitting
7m34s I could be higher energy as the host, but I’m being nice and positive at least
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E285S4Zjtk0
0m03s I should’ve worked this in six minutes earlier
2m17s This line either gets an applause break or nothing, I hate it
4m05s Doing time between comics
4m57s Say “relationship play”
6m15s We had an audience member randomly yell stuff throughout the show but it wasn’t heckling
6m58s Cut the pink umbrella line
7m27s That’s so random it’s awesome
7m44s Good improvised line
8m07s Good job bailing on the joke and bringing up the next comic on a laugh
Part 3
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E9jgF8YJ5-M
1m46s Change this joke’s ending
Overall: I did a good job of staying positive when the show started out slow and got some decent laughs when I did time between comics.
A late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9E07B4mYXXc
0m47s Nice
1m01s When it’s hectic, not doing jokes right away got people to listen after a minute
2m27s Get the word “If” in both sentences “I would’ve assumed it, IF you hadn’t said it… and IF it hadn’t been for the great coat hangar attack…”
4m10s Get rid of “He stole whole movie”
6m48s Not enough laughs in this joke
7m28s I hate the Jewel joke because the end gets the most consistent applause break but it slows my set to a crawl before that
8m44s That was a good improvised call back
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RAbwRv42KYo
0m19s I could’ve responded to her with “then you know how this’ll work, you’ll be like, I wanna spend the rest of my life with you…”
Overall: I did a good job in the beginning in getting everyone to quiet down and pay attention and the set went well
A show in Harlem
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x_7b8IEpIoc
0m12s The host was doing that before, so I wanted to try it, and it worked
0m15s I could’ve done it a few more times
1m59s The mom character is moving too much without purpose
3m40s Say “your” before “failed expectations”
3m59s Get rid of “he stole whole movie”
4m23s This joke works best when someone calls out for me to do it after I purposefully bail
5m54s I lost them on this joke, it’s more than a minute of barely any laughs
6m28s And it was a weak payoff
6m34s When a joke misses completely, address it before just going into another joke
7m24s Say “partners” not “hookups”
9m30s Hit this line more angrily
Overall: Good first five minutes then I lost them at the Jewel joke and never fully got them back
The worst mic in the city
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5ZvlXrxathA
2m33s I need another line for when nobody laughs at the joke fake out
Overall: I got a few laughs here, which means it’d kill anywhere else
