A 8PM Show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=33r0hHwWZ-k
0m24s Say “Hi Girls” then pause then say the line
2m09s Add on to it with “do a line in the bathroom”
3m03s Milk the modeling for longer
4m56s Change “All I did” to “All you do”
6m10s Sell the dodging around more
7m28s Good save
Overall: I lost them on the last two jokes. The “you were no accident” joke needs fixing.
A 6:30 PM Show for a crowd of 10-15
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l7DHjjqLzV4
0m22s After throwing my hand up, turn to the other side of the audience while holding the “what the hell?” look
2m34s Look at the same person while striking poses
3m06s Change it back to “Jesus wants you to…”
4m27s Change my voice for him
5m49s Change it “so it’s worth it”
Overall: Solid for the size of the audience but I could’ve ended a stronger.
A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6mTef1iWyc0
0m49s And this one liner is officially retired
4m47s Cut the “donate to science” parts
5m16s Keep my gaze in one place after that punch line
7m29s Only do one food reference, then make the second one something else
Overall: Decent enough for an open mic
The late night music and comedy mic with like 6 audience members
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z1xnuB6A-4w
1m56s Great call back to improvised material
5m40s That’s a good line
6m10s Good adjustment to the glass breaking
7m12s I should’ve said, “this is like one of those ink blots”
8m22s That’s funny, I should repeat that
9m25s This is a fun set, I should be like this every time I’m on stage
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uK2HSLyVHTY
4m35s An interruption during a list destroys the punch line
5m17s Good job adjusting to that
5m37s Nice save
6m54s Rephrase to “little known fact, if you donate a corpse to science, they’ll pick up the body”
7m26s I can try to take it even further by adding, “can I borrow some lube?”
Part 3
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hAbg5IZy0tA
0m54s This is a 3am only joke
4m13s Funny
5m03s Good job milking this for literally 12 seconds, I should always milk it like this
6m02s And the bartender has started to play with my camera, bad zooms to ensue
8m05s I can start singing the Destiny’s Child “I’m a survivor” song…
Part 4
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1ayu1LyOWXw
1m08s Good line
4m16s This joke is a lot funnier with a zoom in on my eyes
Overall: I did 35 minutes without any notes and had a lot of fun. Sure I only did like 15 minutes of actual jokes in there, but I was really relaxed and everyone was laughing. I need to learn how to copy my delivery in this venue to everywhere else I perform.
Headlining a show in Staten Island for 8 audience members
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gk8-VhZpPYc
3m27s Good improvised line / flirtation
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cyTUd_u-QP8
1m57s Try making this into a one liner that’s delivered like a throw away
3m07s Kill the “hategasm” line and reword the ending of the joke
3m27s Yes that’s too far
4m40s Try to keep a straight face on that line
7m59s Don’t step on the laugh
Part 3
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=84DL_TSulSs
0m15s If I stumble on a word, stumble for longer to make it fun
3m23s Throw in another line to keep punching it. After “I’m a pimp, I won’t do that” I can throw in “If someone tried that on me, I’d throw her out the house”
4m01s Add “and I was like” before “Everyone in New York”
Overall: Not great, but I had fun with the tiny crowd and did 25 minutes. I need stop over acknowledging when things aren’t going great. And I also need to keep my internal thought processes to myself instead of explaining the psychology behind jokes.
