A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kig_ZFVw4rw
1m47s No need for the word “tomorrow”
1m52s No need for the line “this clip is going straight to your Facebook wall”
3m26s Reconsider the “bar chart of their prices” line
4m58s Don’t change “car salesman” and “sell cars” it has to be the exact same line
Overall: The newer versions of the Netflix joke and the Cum Like You joke are getting there, but the cool nerd concept needs work
Doing a set towards the end of my Queens show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jSJzoQjyNt4
1m28s Cut the beer bottle whistle idea
1m45s It should be “soft degree” not “soft paper”
2m51s Just bail out of the joke at this point
4m30s Put my arm out against the wall for a better pose
6m10s Make a joke there, or make the next joke related to my question
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k647hnAgFEc
1m19s Nice save by being honest
Overall: Weak set, I need to stop thinking out loud if the thinking is about how the set is currently going.
Going last on the late night show, the few remaining audience members have been here for 2.5+ hours
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=llllWtkdBcg
3m54s Go back to saying “delicious” instead of “ferocious”
4m04s It should be twenty bucks
5m13s I need a better response for when nobody gets that it’s a fake out joke
7m24s That’s a stretch
Overall: Weak. I should’ve started this set by talking to the audience a little before going right into material, just to let them know I realize they’ve been there for a while and all that.
Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7lW1-cgefuQ
0m31s I butchered Shawn White’s last name
0m58s I didn’t sell how horrible I felt it was
1m16s Cut the science donation part
Overall: Working out some new jokes, they need work
The 8PM Show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7lW1-cgefuQ
1m56s Put more emphasis on “Berlin Wall”
3m00s Look the same way for the second pose
4m06s Great in the moment response
5m58s Stepped on a laugh, slow down
Overall: Solid but I need to slowdown on the Netflix joke
