Category: Comedy

Late night music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EcllEZBItIQ

1m38s Go into him trying this more, and make more jokes on it

2m59s Go back a line in the joke so everyone is still with me

3m24s Make the bottom of the bar graph clearer

3m59s Get rid of “I got it at Ikea”

4m57s Weird that this is the response it’s getting, I need to change these lines cause this isn’t a joke intended to get an “oooo”

5m35s It might funnier if I don’t say “I like your shoes” before doing the joke

8m10s Say “Cats” again before saying “the musical”

9m00s Instead of “horrified” say “upset”

9m14s Longer pause after “never forget”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EhbgUnCrGlU

0m33s Say “hazard lights”

Overall: Working out newer jokes, the second part of the millionaire joke needs a lot of rework and the ID thing needs some work but has potential.

A mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bPNy4xPtjpw

0m32s Either use the mic stand for the whole act out, or for none of it

1m08s Set up the act out

1m35s Get rid of the line “it’s an Ikea couch”

2m32s Change everything from where she starts saying “I like your hair and I’m a multimillionaire”

5m16s Do a better old person act out

Overall: Average response for a mic. The second half of the millionaire joke needs major rework and the other new jokes need more careful wording.

A music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JSlckYEcgsA

0m50s Say “I’ve been looking for a new phone and”

2m15s Say a name smoothly

2m56s This joke needs work but has potential

4m48s This joke needs work

5m12s Make it more clear that this is hypothetical

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kHTyubIHN68

0m14s That’s funny

Overall: My delivery was nice and relaxed, the newer jokes still need work but this was as fun as a mic gets.

MCing a bar show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEvKQElywZA

0m53s Good misinterpretation

1m28s When I screw up the psychic stuff, I should be more upset and focus on “now they’re like, he better be funny”

1m55s I should ask them what kind of phone they got or something

2m20s Don’t blow the punch line

2m33s If the first punch line is messed up, just get out of the joke

2m58s No need to go there, I should do it as a psychic where he’s the third one, “ivy league, state school, high school drop out”

4m13s That’s funny

4m35s Try “we can all have an orgy on a first name basis” instead

6m18s Rephrase to “always wonder why she has a hunchback”

7m22s Be more specific than office

8m51s Add in, “that’s not the same thing, right”

Overall: Decent job hosting, I talked to the crowd on a bunch and only did 4 jokes in 9 minutes. I need to learn how to do my jokes with more energy when hosting…

A mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-c3QVAFCz9o

1m34s Few people understand the premise of “I use ethics to justify my actions” reword this

2m10s This might be better off as a one liner

5m21s Stepped on a laugh

5m33s Sell the “what the hell” look stronger

6m22s Shake a fist or something

Overall: I did two straight minutes of one liners for the first time in a while, it was a fun change of pace. The newer jokes up front need work.