An open mic with 6-8 real audience members there
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=En1cBiexrwQ
2m12s Good job being in the moment and earning a lot of extra laughs
6m45s Keep the side comment
Overall: Very solid set. The rewritten mom jokes at the end could use a little tightening.
A late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EHgQOqgncxQ
4m32s Decent improvisation
9m38s Good improvised rant
10m49s Reword to “just picture this set”
14m45s She makes a point because the gate shouldn’t go below 90 degrees
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TOM4M7mWWj4
2m18s Having someone do the the joke with me was fun
7m35s Don’t say “business” twice in the same sentence
8m22s Change “empathy” to “compassion”
Overall: I had fun rolling with all the interruptions and such.
A writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eLZkoQ7lrlM
0m19s The comedy police would ask “have you been doing punch lines today?”
1m19s Cut the labor markets line
2m27s Reword to “all you do is funny business”
4m10s Cut the politician part
Overall: Working out rewritten jokes.
Going last at a music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NrRHz_rV1OE
0m45s After “that only took like ten seconds” say, “now we can cuddle”
3m29s Sound a little more excited about the impression
5m42s Do a smoother setup for this joke
6m11s Do walk to the back of the runway like a model would do
8m46s Get a better chart to end the joke on
10m05s Commit harder to the dance
Overall: Eh. The corporate girl joke worked well, everything else had a weak response.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JWUl8Y6JH98
0m53s Change “if the girl” to “if my girl”
1m05s Smoother on the wording
1m45s Change the chart I’d bring
5m12s I need to do the Russian mom stuff that works first, otherwise it’s not a good test
5m54s More emphasis on “guys just got tired of waiting”
Overall: Decent for a mic. I need to not stumble over words when doing new jokes.
