An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uSS7GjTF5WY
0m38s My satire skills aren’t that strong
2m21s Cut the tags after “pliers”
2m40s Cut the “quite the seamstress” line
2m53s Cut the “you’re just gonna leave in an hour” line
4m14s No need for the “surprisingly line”
Overall: Decent for a mic but nothing great.
A late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=enSaeWHbbBE
8m27s Say the line angrier
9m48s That’s a good save line. I should’ve used it much earlier in the set
9m56s No need for the tag
11m27s It doesn’t make sense to say that line after having a mini conversation, only do it after a joke
Overall: Weak first half, better second half.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rIwTpbzMB-Y
0m40s Probably not worth keeping this joke
1m46s Don’t crack a smile
2m48s Rewrite everything after “they leave my house scratched”
4m50s Step into the punchline more
Overall: Decent for a mic.
Doing a check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0-8kzHOZx1A
0m14s Pause after “guys looked up”
4m33s Too much delivery on “like a normal person”
4m49s Cut the line “you’re not funny” go straight to “I don’t appreciate your jokes”
Overall: Decent for a check spot.
A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dabY7nF8i7g
4m11s The last line calls for another candy reminder act out
Overall: Okay for a mic.
