An 8PM Show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3vvxEmVBPao
0m30s Phrase that stronger
1m02s Add “buy my new book: Ben’s life advice” or something like that
2m40s Say this line a lot sooner then don’t mention it again for a joke or two
5m57s Figure out a way to make the two state solution line more consistent
Overall: Eh. I got consistent (but low) laughs throughout and a few big laughs.
The Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rd9_-CTFevQ
4m01s The electric fence should be in my normal voice
Overall: Standard open mic response, I’m working on going in and out of the crazy character.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZU6Pj8msJPE
0m45s Don’t open with the joke I just opened with
3m30s Might want to consider cutting the agent line
5m20s I should’ve addressed the heckle
6m25s When interrupted go straight to “Jesus would use a ripsaw” instead of “you’d be surprised”
6m52s Reword to “Florida license plates”
Overall: I bombed and the character didn’t connect with the audience and didn’t respond to the interactions well.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NU0KsULugXc
1m42s It should be “I don’t” not “you don’t”
4m43s This is a good idea but needs to be worded better
Overall: Average response for a mic.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0BA-PEjFIyk
0m43s I don’t like this “I feel like laughing” so early in the set
2m27s Look at that table for the time between those two lines
Overall: On video it sounds like a decent set, but in actuality one table loved the character and the rest of the room hated it (or at least didn’t laugh much).
