The Sunday writers mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VgyjPHbbc5c
1m03s The voices line should always be the second bit I do, not the third
2m56s Reword to make this a statement instead of a question
3m40s Use the word “if” instead of “whether”
Overall: Working out new stuff, and it needs work
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GjW3jLczJDQ
1m32s Weird that the three lines before that didn’t get much response, but this line did
3m27s Do this in my regular voice
6m11s Good job ending on a strong laugh
Overall: Solid set but not amazing. Even though the stuff is working, there’s a couple of adjustments needed.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0vdNIkqMx2U
2m30s Make the accent more consistent
5m10s Say the “fall in love” and “romantic” lines in my regular voice
8m52s Make an act out voice for the “call the cops” line
Overall: Average with some good moments but the momentum could’ve built better.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VAMdCV1j8XQ
1m51s Nice to get applause breaks at a mic
2m10s It should be “chiseling” not “carving”
2m52s Make it a statement, not a question
3m35s Cut or fully rework that last joke
4m39s Might make sense to change voices in the middle of this
Overall: The old joke went over really well, the new jokes need work
A late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MWDjKHUx4sg
2m18s I didn’t think/know/intend that as a punch line
4m42s This line isn’t needed after a good laugh
7m01s Say “inflation” a little more upbeat
8m36s Good job being in the moment
9m41s I can turn to an audience member like, “he’s like, is that true? Hmmm”
12m22s Don’t finish the joke or address the comment first
Overall: Decent not great.
