Going last at another mic with 5 or 6 comics in the room
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YAbDudq4xuM
3m43s Do the mom accent better
Overall: Very weak response, even for a mic.
Performance Critique: March 23a
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JsmdE9y-wps
3m11s Don’t do two crazy bits in a row without saying something in the normal voice first, especially if it’s the first bits I’m doing
4m11s Say “Ok but” before “I was gonna make it a surprise”
4m48s Slow down the “ha ha ha”
5m38s Say “businessman” in the same intonation as my mom
Overall: Average for a mic.
Performance Critique: March 22b
A 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N-y_fJDCp58
0m29s There’s a window to the outside world and someone waved at me so I went with it
1m00s That’s an improvised line that should become a regular line
2m23s Don’t acknowledge lack of response on that line, it’s not supposed to get a laugh
2m51s Don’t admit to dumbing down jokes, especially when I am
2m59s Pause longer after “tragedy”
4m55s Don’t step on laughs
5m06s No need for that line
6m05s Change my hand motion for the friend act out
7m44s Picture everyone for an extra second
8m18s The line makes much more sense after a crazy voice joke
8m50s Cut the trunk and last night lines
Overall: The actual material was a little up and down at times, but I did a great job of being in the moment and calling things out that were happening in the room.
Performance Critique: March 22a
Doing a spot at my Tuesday bar show for a few people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xTaoTxVtDEQ
2m23s Put “laughed” last
5m08s Shrug first then say the romantic line
7m44s The cops line should be in my normal voice
8m23s The “ooh” should coordinate better with the hand motion
9m44s Don’t say “today” twice in the same sentence
10m22s Don’t break character
10m41s She actually spilled beer on herself, so I did make her “wet”
Overall: Solid set for a small crowd
Performance Critique: March 21b
Going up last 2.5+ hours into the show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GWCyocbK_9k
2m39s Good job being in the moment and calling something out
3m14s Say the line a little slower
4m53s Good end laugh but the lines before this need tightening
