Performance Critique: March 20a

Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JBBHwi6qU30

0m24s Cut or rework everything after thesaurus

0m49s No need for “international disaster”

3m14s Say “fine” before the surprise

3m41s Cut the plus minus line

Overall: Decent for a going for at a mic

Performance Critique: March 19b

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=16_BYFv0p48

0m34s Try pausing after “I also laughed”

7m28s Say “broke” instead of “impoverished”

Overall: Solid set. The mom not scared joke needs a little work but has lots of potential.

Performance Critique: March 19a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dYLtX7q-pxI

1m32s Cut or rewrite the part after thesaurus

3m24s Change the joke

3m40s The dangerous line should be in my normal voice

4m05s I should say “relax” and pause before the cheating husbands part

5m08s Move arm around more during “ooh look at me”

Overall: Average for a mic

Performance Critique: March 18c

Doing a check spot on the 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L0EKuS6rD9o

2m18s Tell her to let it out, not cover it up

3m48s That was a decent response

6m02s Good response

6m27s Good call back

Overall: Considering it was a rough check spot, I did a good job not being too fazed and had a couple of decent responses to heckles.

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