A music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=El_a9-Dz2Mw
3m34s Keep my eyes open
7m29s That’s a good random line
7m44s Cut “I did”
9m41s Whisper this line
9m57s Go straight to the mom’s commentary without introducing it
10m52s Hit the line harder
Overall: Good set.
A bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8htbFEu6rcY
1m19s No need to address the one weird laugh if everyone else laughed fine
3m07s Change my voice for the drunk voice, slur it or something
6m07s Go into the stance as I smile, don’t do one before the other
6m18s No need for “I did”
9m22s Don’t break into the character there
Overall: Decent.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=frm0v7SqXdE
1m56s Try a different, less high pitched sound
2m19s Sound drunker
3m00s Make a more definitive motion for wiping my lips
5m30s Reword to “that other character Ben, he’s the made up one”
Overall: Weak response, even for a mic
Going up 3 hours into a show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lRQI3fRk2eY
1m31s Say “oh it’s okay” to parallel the first part of the joke
2m11s Setup the act out better
4m58s The mic stand should be in a different position
5m11s This should be his first joke
Overall: Good for this late into a show.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Og4lktv8es
1m53s Doing the psychotic character is my voice doesn’t work
Overall: I just talked for 5 of the 6 minutes. Sometimes you just gotta do it.
